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    dots Submission Name: Every moment is somewheredots
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    Author: hyproglo
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    dotsEvery moment is somewheredots
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    Its just that time of the year for your cleanse
    Pull every nerve together to neglect anything and everything

    Even the monsters and the gods

    Let us all strum our music to your monumental moment.

    Gave up count but all I know
    It is good to be me

    No need for a maniacal diet

    Herein lies no real solution
    And if it sounds like double talking jive,
    well then...
    is not that the same as all of your
    end over end automated moments?

    Now that we're opened up and torn
    Why not confuse the land and circle ourselves into contentment?

    I can accomplish contentment with a shrug of the shoulders, a wink and a smile

    And meet you anytime in between

    Assuming there is no schedule involved...

    Nothing is "popular" when the windows are down and the radio is on.

    "Was that heaven tonight?"

    "No my dear, it was just beautiful delight."

    Check your shoes...they are still tied.

    Herein lies a little thing that those who now know have seemed to taken the time to forget

    And those that have no clue will one day find out and eventually forget

    Herein lies everything that nothing knew and everything was about

    And all that was known was discarded and
    never strewn about

    "She made a simple gesture of mine seem so divine...who was I to argue."

    Every moment's in the blood.




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