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    dots Submission Name: Before and Afterdots
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    Author: closetpoet
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 51/106/70
    Words: 40
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsBefore and Afterdots
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    I think of my yesterdays
    bleak
    cold
    featureless
    as a snow swept Nebraska interstate
    Now, her
    vibrant
    warm
    remarkable
    as Duval Street
    on an October Key West evening
    I think of my future




    Submitted on 2016-01-13 18:05:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It has started out very beautifully, maybe just expand more of it, include more of real memories of before and after. I quite liked itxx blessxx
    | Posted on 2016-02-16 00:00:00 | by vedanta19 | [ Reply to This ]


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