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    dots Submission Name: Winter Mourningdots

    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.32 - 288/229/264
    Words: 29
    Class/Type: Haiku/
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    the Bow and the Man have left us with an increasing drought of brilliance...

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    dotsWinter Mourningdots

    water seethes the air
    it lifts in its cloudy form
    the cold is its noose

    winter frost seems light
    draped upon the land so white
    heavy upon leaves.

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      the word, make me want to drink hot cocoa and plan some time in the snow.

    | Posted on 2016-01-21 00:00:00 | by lyricvixen | [ Reply to This ]

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