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    dots Submission Name: Tethereddots
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    Author: expiring_touch
    ASL Info:    26/f/Hamburg
    Elite Ratio:    4.03 - 136/243/156
    Words: 47
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsTethereddots
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    This much has gone, that much is clear,
    your eyes gloss over mine,
    my lips, and I keep
    thinking
    you like me.
    I fling my hands about and raise
    voices and talk mostly
    nonsense ---
    but so much rather ---
    silence, tethered
    to the edge.




    Submitted on 2016-01-14 14:18:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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