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After work


Author: expiring_touch
ASL Info:    30/f/Hamburg
Elite Ratio:    3.91 - 139 /260 /173
Words: 61
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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After work



We drove towards the weekend, and away,
and talked insignificant things and even less
insignificant people.
Rain trickled down, mid-winter,
curled the edges of my hair
fogged your glasses, and I kept
fidgeting.
One stop more you’d glance to check,
we’d say our good byes, hurry,
before the doors
close.










Submitted on 2016-01-15 17:10:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I really enjoyed this poem. I loved the imagery and how you allowed the reader to build their own narrative. Just enough detail; just enough distance. Thank you.
| Posted on 2016-02-04 00:00:00 | by closetpoet | [ Reply to This ]
  There is a lot of life in this short and sweet write. I liked it. It was lively.
| Posted on 2016-01-29 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]


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