After work

Author: expiring_touch ASL Info:    30/f/Hamburg Elite Ratio:    3.91 - 139 /260 /173 Words: 61

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After work

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We drove towards the weekend, and away, and talked insignificant things and even less insignificant people. Rain trickled down, mid-winter, curled the edges of my hair fogged your glasses, and I kept fidgeting. One stop more you’d glance to check, we’d say our good byes, hurry, before the doors close.

Submitted on 2016-01-15 17:10:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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I really enjoyed this poem. I loved the imagery and how you allowed the reader to build their own narrative. Just enough detail; just enough distance. Thank you.

| Posted on 2016-02-04 00:00:00 | by closetpoet | [ Reply to This ]

There is a lot of life in this short and sweet write. I liked it. It was lively.

| Posted on 2016-01-29 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]

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