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    dots Submission Name: Muscle Cardots
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    Author: hyproglo
    Elite Ratio:    4 - 180/257/152
    Words: 122
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsMuscle Cardots
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    It's a time of perfect complications
    Past accounts strangle first impressions

    A bad omen for concrete minds
    All mixed up and permanently set

    Stillborn excessive phenomenon
    Cascades in its innocence

    Where was that moment when the sky
    Did not match
    the thoughts in your eye?

    Perhaps it's not arrived

    Demoting retired thoughts and enjoying what is now

    A time for uncertain aspirations
    Unexpected surprises and bosoms full of trust

    No sin in lusting for a better world

    Dewpoints drop
    Jet streams flow
    Sun
    Snow
    A smile
    A glow

    As plentiful as the dark
    Belief and hope are not bizarre

    They're never out of style
    Just like a muscle car




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