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Submission Name: Muscle Car dots

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Author:	hyproglo
Elite Ratio:	4 - 180/257/152
Words:	122

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Muscle Car dots

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It's a time of perfect complications
Past accounts strangle first impressions

A bad omen for concrete minds
All mixed up and permanently set

Stillborn excessive phenomenon
Cascades in its innocence

Where was that moment when the sky
Did not match
the thoughts in your eye?

Perhaps it's not arrived

Demoting retired thoughts and enjoying what is now

A time for uncertain aspirations
Unexpected surprises and bosoms full of trust

No sin in lusting for a better world

Dewpoints drop
Jet streams flow
Sun
Snow
A smile
A glow

As plentiful as the dark
Belief and hope are not bizarre

They're never out of style
Just like a muscle car

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