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Submission Name:
Muscle Car
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Author:
hyproglo
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122
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Muscle Car
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It's a time of perfect complications
Past accounts strangle first impressions
A bad omen for concrete minds
All mixed up and permanently set
Stillborn excessive phenomenon
Cascades in its innocence
Where was that moment when the sky
Did not match
the thoughts in your eye?
Perhaps it's not arrived
Demoting retired thoughts and enjoying what is now
A time for uncertain aspirations
Unexpected surprises and bosoms full of trust
No sin in lusting for a better world
Dewpoints drop
Jet streams flow
Sun
Snow
A smile
A glow
As plentiful as the dark
Belief and hope are not bizarre
They're never out of style
Just like a muscle car
Submitted on 2016-01-18 23:16:56
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