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    dots Submission Name: Divine dots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/176
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Divine


    We can all relate in this virtual world
    Where we all have these true words
    And keyboards
    Full hearts
    And
    Real emotions.



    To tell
    The tales of our
    Times , in this hell
    On earth.


    We are all
    Abundant cells
    Colliding In time
    Reminded of times
    That might be played
    out by our karma's hold
    And infinite divine hope.


    Have the cells spilt just to reunite?




    Is the universe that kind?


    Are our souls
    these undefined
    Lights
    That need to be
    Recharged
    By
    Life?

    Humanity

    Love


    Hope


    Joy

    So we may learn that
    ...................................Love prevails.









    Submitted on 2016-01-20 00:42:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Divine

    We can all relate in this virtual world
    where we all express these true words
    keyboards full of hearts, real emotions.

    Pray tell of the tales of our times in hell
    on earth we are after all real dead cells
    colliding in time reminded of a time.

    That might be played over and out
    for Karma's hold the divine hope
    our cells have the cells natural.

    We too must one day unite
    in the universe that exists
    our souls are undefined.

    Light that needs to be
    charged by life to be
    a part of humanity.

    Love, Hope, Joy
    learn life has it
    love prevails.
    | Posted on 2016-01-20 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


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