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    dots Submission Name: CATHARSIS dots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/176
    Words: 53
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Catharsis


    Comparing the effects of tragedy on the mind

    Of spectacular effect.

    Allowing of oneself


    To


    Poop.



    Purge.



    Let Go.



    Remember your old friend


    Catharsis.










    Submitted on 2016-01-21 23:14:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Nice.

    Lloyd
    | Posted on 2016-01-31 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      Every time I read this piece I felt something a bit different going on. I think it's the way the last two lines sit. Sometimes when I read this it's about the death of a friend, and sometimes the friend is Catharsis. The word "poop" is a bit startling, but somehow it works out as a part of the purge.

    Not sure why your work doesn't come up on the posts, but I'm somewhat jealous. My Hide feature does not work.
    | Posted on 2016-01-22 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]


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