Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: A message to the heartdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.15 - 51/165/170
    Words: 45
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 479
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 365



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsA message to the heartdots
    -------------------------------------------


    I want from you:


    To


    UPHEAVE



    the



    seeds

    Of

    Mistrust.


    ....


    The



    Mind



    Will


    Follow





    Submitted on 2016-01-27 14:13:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      I never thought the toilet paper would or could run out and your ass proved it.
    | Posted on 2016-01-31 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    201014

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Lilitu written by endlessgame23
    Suffer The Children written by poetotoe
    Delicious Stews written by elephantasia
    Reliquary of Writ written by HisNameIsNoMore
    I AM THANKFUL FOR written by Ramneet
    Still Perfectly Flawed written by armand
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth written by endlessgame23
    The World written by jjd
    Vortex: The Imagination That Is written by KeeperOfLight
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (4) written by endlessgame23
    phantom limbs written by expiring_touch
    Angel Eyes written by poetotoe
    Journey written by endlessgame23
    Etiquette written by saartha
    The Unicorn written by BlazeFlamme
    I, Plutarch written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Coversheets written by TheStillSilence
    Lost Inside the Race written by ForgottenGraves
    i've missed written by mysalvation
    Cover written by saartha
    Birds of a Feather written by poetotoe
    Carry written by saartha
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (3) written by endlessgame23
    Life is moments written by Ramneet
    Florida's Autumn Solstice written by closetpoet
    The Poems Death written by Mepoduo
    My Four Seasons written by faideddarkness
    Across the bed written by expiring_touch
    Records I written by Raphael
    (Untitled Song) written by TeslaKoyal

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry