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    Author: hyproglo
    Elite Ratio:    4 - 180/257/152
    Words: 232
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    I enjoy the taste of high fiber chocolate brownies
    They remind me to smile at bakers and those associated with their craft.

    "If I could bottle or package my trend..."

    Playing fifth fiddle to a mediocre musician
    Never in their zone

    More alive when depicted naked and atoned.

    Honest.

    "Did you forget to pray?"

    "How are you going to make it through the fucking day?"

    Never fear, never mind...held on that ledge of perfection

    then let go

    Always on the money and never gone

    Too hungry to take anything less and far more blessed by the nature of the way things work

    "...who can bring you to the pinnacle of an orgasm with just a wink and a smile?"

    Betcha never knew everyone had a kickstart.

    Awaiting the American Pompeii...

    Everyday...meet yourself some more

    Unfold another rhyme

    Painted into an original you never knew

    Keep testing your new model

    And see

    Where that gets you

    Shadows in your eyes while professing to be merely human

    Lines can be thin or thick but they always have two ends

    Crazy...abandonments of right and wrong
    Random...common sense is always on the money
    Fueled...punch drunk selfish stupidity.

    And say tomorrow sobriety reigns...yet seek another trick.

    Tell me something I don't know.




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