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I enjoy the taste of high fiber chocolate brownies
They remind me to smile at bakers and those associated with their craft.
"If I could bottle or package my trend..."
Playing fifth fiddle to a mediocre musician
Never in their zone
More alive when depicted naked and atoned.
"Did you forget to pray?"
"How are you going to make it through the fucking day?"
Never fear, never mind...held on that ledge of perfection
then let go
Always on the money and never gone
Too hungry to take anything less and far more blessed by the nature of the way things work
"...who can bring you to the pinnacle of an orgasm with just a wink and a smile?"
Betcha never knew everyone had a kickstart.
Awaiting the American Pompeii...
Everyday...meet yourself some more
Unfold another rhyme
Painted into an original you never knew
Keep testing your new model
Where that gets you
Shadows in your eyes while professing to be merely human
Lines can be thin or thick but they always have two ends
Crazy...abandonments of right and wrong
Random...common sense is always on the money
Fueled...punch drunk selfish stupidity.
And say tomorrow sobriety reigns...yet seek another trick.
Tell me something I don't know.
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