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    dots Submission Name: White flag dots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/175
    Words: 46
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsWhite flag dots
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    I keep waving this flag




    It's white



    But my surrender or attempts thereof
    Criticized by the world of .......

    You



    Your eyes cried




    Now you want mine to.




    Submitted on 2016-01-29 01:58:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I never thought the toilet paper would or could run out and your ass proved it.
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