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    dots Submission Name: Street Lights dots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 52/166/172
    Words: 481
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       A fun thought....what if my answer to your question of "what Do you expect from me" was ......BABIES!?!?!? Would you still have wanted to kiss me? No?!? Run..oh ok yea or that...


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    dotsStreet Lights dots
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    Street lights
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    I saw you differently
    under the street lights
    I felt you completely
    Engulfed in your energy

    I saw the way you were looking at me
    Stepping closer and closer
    to push the boundaries
    To see if I would push you away.

    Instead I stepped back
    to make sure
    That the energy I felt
    was not imaginary.

    Stepping closer to see
    That what was
    Starting in my belly
    moving upwards
    Heart beating vigorously
    Was real.

    Swirling
    Head to toe
    Hair standing straight up
    Sensations
    I felt your energy
    Move through me.

    Overwhelming
    Stepping into your energy field
    Looking around
    To take in the little details
    surrounding.

    Full moon

    pulling the tides of the night


    Questions of expectations
    Answers
    Nothing.

    I want nothing from you
    I still do

    Wishing for only your happiness
    To break the chains of past slain
    Letting go of tortured thoughts.

    Standing under the street lamp
    Looking out at the lake
    Sweating profusely
    Time slowed


    Conquered moments in the dark.

    You reached out for me
    Pulling on my heart while
    tugging on my hand
    Looking deeply inside me
    Asking for me to think so clearly

    My thoughts were lacking
    leaving no words
    To explain my heart
    Because it was all too real
    Slapping me In the face
    demanding substance.

    Reaching out for me
    I realized a deeper
    Meaning.
    You wanting to kiss me
    trying to fight and then
    Surrendering.

    But the truth is
    I wasn't prepared
    For the depth of your love
    The strength of your clutch
    The emotions evoked

    I had no idea
    I thought you were
    playing with neon lights.

    Dancing in the rain.


    Awash In The thoughts
    Of yesterday.

    Cascading lights
    That danced alongside
    Of us.


    You tried to tell me
    but I dismissed it
    So when you saw me
    You went for it.
    Ceasing the moment

    Carpe Diem

    And for that my thoughts
    won't stop

    Rewind replay reset

    Like our very own mixed cassette.

    Try again
    Rewind replay reset
    Leaving lyrical works
    Inspired by you.

    foot prints
    Impressed upon
    my heart
    Stepping out
    onto a limb.
    We cherish this
    more now then
    THEN.

    Taking risks with confidence
    Moving closer and closer to me.

    Looking inside
    Finding it hard to digest
    I deflect the questions

    Instead looking off
    into the darkness
    I become numb
    Wanting to spill it
    Telling you everything.

    But leaving telling you nothing

    I am sorry.

    For my insanity.







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      I never thought the toilet paper would or could run out and your ass proved it.
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