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    dots Submission Name: Monster-ous Lovedots
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    Author: closetpoet
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 51/106/70
    Words: 67
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsMonster-ous Lovedots
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    Bits and pieces
    the remains of our lives past
    dug up and sewn together
    creating one desire
    to electrify our being
    into new life

    Changed
    from scared complacency
    howling beneath new moons
    releasing the wild
    and uninhibited pilose beast
    a love to rage

    Cloaked in darkness
    feasting on each other's appetite
    and bitten by love's enchantment
    surviving the light of ordinary days
    we arise
    eternal




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