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    dots Submission Name: Euthanize Medots
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    Author: dancer-of-words
    ASL Info:    21/trans/US
    Elite Ratio:    4.6 - 167/158/74
    Words: 143
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsEuthanize Medots
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    In the dark, stare out the window
    cause the pain is without end
    And you're praying and you're hoping
    for the day your mind will mend
    from the darkness and the nightmares
    from the horror in your eyes
    from the sleepless nights and trauma
    as the hope inside you dies.

    But they say that euthanasia
    is a selfish thing to do
    that it means that you're a coward
    since you couldn't see life through

    And the ones who spew this bullshit
    never felt the way you do
    and can't find any compassion
    for a person such as you.

    Instead they have only judgement
    and say more pain lies ahead
    endless burning in hellfire
    for the pained already dead

    Seeking to escape their misery
    finding only more instead
    But you can't escape their fingers
    and you can't escape your dread.




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      Okay, so I've been here so many times, I understand the Religious expectations being thrown at you to keep your life, yet it all seems like bullshit to keep you here, feeling all the shit that is going on in the world. Seeing it every day just getting worse. Can't see a solution in the horizon. Gloom, a heavy fog bearing down on you and everything you do. The brief glimpses of happiness and the will to stride on muddled by constant circumstances ailing your pursuit of happiness and a content life. The way you have worded this all into a few stanzas blows my mind. Reading this just puts me right next to you at that window staring out, feeling what you're feeling. You truly do dance with the words. I want to thank you for the time you have put into your works and commenting on others as well. People like you make this community so awesome!

    -Eggshells
    | Posted on 2016-02-27 00:00:00 | by eggshells | [ Reply to This ]
      I read the title and thought, "Oh great! Another suicide poem!"
    So I read it.
    And it started off quite sad and depressing, but at the end it made me want to eat some ice cream...so I am going to press the "Post this Critique" button and run off to Leatherbys and get a hot fudge sundae.

    Thanks for the inspiration!
    | Posted on 2016-02-05 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]


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