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    dots Submission Name: Mortedots
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    Author: Blue Monk
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1547/457/118
    Words: 33
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsMortedots
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    Slip away old friend
    the dogs are barking, the cat is watching
    vapors drifting, stars to melt
    'tis that day you've awaited
    illusions no more
    sanctus verbatim




    Submitted on 2016-02-03 09:23:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Poem for a poem?

    And this is the holy repetition;
    breath becomes breath,
    dust becomes dust
    but this is life
    (or what you make of it)

    I think we all hope to pass away in our sleep, like the Grandpa in Grumpier Old Men who closes his eyes to take a nap in his rocking chair on the porch and never opens them again. In any case, I'm sure the animals know first.

    | Posted on 2016-02-12 00:00:00 | by BlankSheet | [ Reply to This ]
      Where is he escaping to (or from)? Or is he going to meet his maker?

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2016-02-04 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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