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    dots Submission Name: Frabjously Vorpaldots
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    Author: monad
    ASL Info:    64/M/California
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1092/410/117
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Prose/Mirror or Mask
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    dotsFrabjously Vorpaldots
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    Pertinaciously vituperative irrefragable determinism. Inscrutable axis of spontaneities’ imaginative. Perplexity’s prognosis to prospectus. Elan vital’s preternatural perpetuity. Cohesive coherency’s opaque opulence. Space-time continuum’s natural induction expressed as identity. Exponentially tangential imagination’s immaturity. Entropy catalyst blonds. Spaciotemporal telemetry tactician’s tellurian terrene. Protractive analyses dimensional delineation. Reflectively refractive positional empathy. Prophylaxis protocol. Objectified manifest's self inductive diminutive minutia iotas of interstitial edict. Graspy greedy stingy frugal mingy minions. Manumission’s indentured servant sail.




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      I caught myself wanting to say, "Entropy catalyst bond" which seems to work instead of "blonde" but upon reflection I see you are correct, as usual, at least with my own history.

    Where to and from who are we getting away here?

    Slip away my friend...




    Lloyd
    | Posted on 2016-02-07 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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