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    Author: hyproglo
    Elite Ratio:    4 - 180/258/153
    Words: 275
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    "I take trips to what I call heaven quite often.", he said.

    "Why would you want to go there?", she wondered.

    "So that I can smile at the snow, trees, sky, dirt... and none of them get jealous of me doing what comes naturally."

    Out of sight, out of mind is the only cliché that is fundamentally untrue.

    But it is justified with whatever justification...

    "I tried to tell the sunset I was there...it still wandered off."

    I have an app for that...but the sunrise doesn't care.

    So I'll take trips to heaven instead.
    The sunset and the sunrise always leave me...to deal with their repro...cushions.

    The night.

    Was it always necessary to inspire light into the darkness
    Some of it should have been left alone

    Bittered and broken by itself
    No need for the likes of this state of mind

    I take trips to the heavens.
    I talk to the sky
    I find gold in what's not set in stone

    Darkness misunderstands that

    Not worth the time.

    Watch...it will fall back into its own self if you give it time.

    Poor, misunderstood darkness.

    Pity it not...it'll show you no respect.

    "Who questions the man that often takes trips to heaven?"

    Let his church be where he dwells
    Let his faith be unsung
    Let his worth be determined by the innocent
    Let his value be hailed by those he's touched
    And let his morals educate.

    But don't ever let him say that he is omnipotent.

    "It's only a matter of time before she goes down."




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