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    dots Submission Name: Travel fardots
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    Author: hyproglo
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    dotsTravel fardots
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    Give me an eternal moment over a temporary crown
    Lose a nerve just to catch a ray of sunshine.

    Someday everything said will be on someone elses' mind...and right on time.

    Stars.

    If there was any evidence that I was there I would have left it.

    And it would be so beautiful.

    "Like sugar and cyanide." (Seether)

    How to pretend not to be part of your makeup society
    Things are ok as long as it makes you feel better

    How sick
    Do you need to be
    to tell yourself
    things are ok

    Imagine the best place you have been and ignore the rest
    Yes...you need it...some time to get away.

    We all deserve a moment of silence
    so that we can imagine
    better ways of ignoring reality.

    But it's a small planet
    No one can travel far.






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