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    dots Submission Name: Y'all need an injectiondots
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    Author: hyproglo
    Elite Ratio:    4 - 180/257/152
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    How to inject
    common sense
    into
    it all

    Cast away religion and politics would be a tremendous leap forward.

    Light years...

    Wouldn't life be easier if we despised each other because of who we were and not what we believed?

    Murderers and pedophiles have pen pals, lawyers and marriage proposals.

    Someone for some reason thinks they should fight to keep them alive.

    Some have two hands, two feet and a solid work ethic...and remain invisible.

    No one protests for the continuation of invisibility.

    Everyone can speak
    In the land of the free
    Earbuds and agendas keep everyone from...

    Listening to common sense doesn't make you unpatriotic

    Can you hear that yet?
    The train of two way respect?

    does it exist in the realm of everyones imagination

    As real as a raindrop on your head or a bird shitting on your shoulder...it's there.

    "I'd run for president but it would take me more than 8 years to fix all you have broke."

    And even then, I'll never convince you...as you bite, gnaw, scratch, wish and pray that every thing I have decided is uncharacteristic to that same old simple way which you said was broken.

    How can you ask someone to lead you into a new world while tucking tail and running...

    Please excuse me for seeking brave peoples votes and not cowards.

    Hang your status quo on the nearest tree branch and join the evolution.

    Your feelings might get hurt but your grandchildren will prosper...if you don't perpetuate your stupidity upon them.

    I'm a proponent of common sense...religion and politics have no influence in a common sense world.
    But I will smile and wave to anyone who believes in religion and politics...heck...I'll even stop and help them fix a flat tire.

    How can you go from where it started to where it is now?

    No one knows the answer, so don't ask...we just got here.




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      I like this, it made me laugh at how true it is. Considering the situation right now, this makes sense.

    -Pix
    | Posted on 2016-03-09 00:00:00 | by pixie_007 | [ Reply to This ]


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