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    dots Submission Name: Earth keeps spinning dots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 52/166/172
    Words: 271
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsEarth keeps spinning dots
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    Common sense and politics is like a fart in church.
    It never mingles well.

    Hopefully you aren't stuck In the heat of it.....
    Positioned into the wrong place to be a witness to the
    Infestation of the funk.

    Politics, religion, and sex never a good dinner table topic.


    Never a good topic at all in my home.


    Unless you want to talk about religion separately.

    Or policy's separately but never sex.

    That's just weird.


    Proportion yourself so you maybe revered
    for your thoughts on life and what seems clear.

    But life has its curve balls, as you know
    And can be tossed about with no way to know.

    Live life to its fullest it doesn't matter
    If you have sense or nonsense or any guts at all
    Cause this world keeps spinning believe it or not
    And it's up to us to decide if we want it or not.


    And yes the birds eye view does lead towards
    the bird shitting with targets in view.

    Your shoulder,
    your hood,
    maybe your view........


    You have two choices
    You can run with the big dawgs
    Or sit on the porch with the puppies
    The choice is yours.
    Don't be a sissy.




    (Hahahaha)
    I'm sorry this is funny.

    I sound like my dad right now ............




















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      I just loved this! What a funny little poem. :D
    | Posted on 2016-02-27 00:00:00 | by TheJadedCritic | [ Reply to This ]


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