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    dots Submission Name: Blank Staredots
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    Author: closetpoet
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    dotsBlank Staredots
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    You stare blankly out the window
    as the road lapses past

    He drives on.
    Playing with the radio;
    finding his favorite sports show

    You know the answer,
    to the question in your head.

    "Oh, look", you think
    "It's that place I wanted to eat at"

    You wouldn't ask
    You know the answer

    You've known, since long ago

    It's about the time you gave in
    gave up

    He drives on.
    Playing with the radio.

    "Oh, I love that song", you think
    as he changes the station.

    You stare out the window
    as your vacuous life goes by.




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      How familiar! and heartbreaking... i completely relate to this poemxx If this is autobiographical, please stand up for yourself. The more you allow yourself to be taken for granted, the more you'd be neglected.
    | Posted on 2016-02-16 00:00:00 | by vedanta19 | [ Reply to This ]
      Appallingly sad my friend.
    | Posted on 2016-02-14 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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