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Author: Chelebel
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Class/Type: Random Thoughts /Nature
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A good steak can be rare no matter how it's cooked.

A good woman can be rare depending on the time of month.

A good man can be ripe only after a long run.

A grape can be ripe at just the right time.

Rare or rarity we all belong.

Submitted on 2016-02-15 21:47:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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