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    dots Submission Name: Rarity dots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/175
    Words: 59
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Nature
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    dotsRarity dots
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    A good steak can be rare no matter how it's cooked.

    A good woman can be rare depending on the time of month.

    A good man can be ripe only after a long run.

    A grape can be ripe at just the right time.

    Rare or rarity we all belong.





    Submitted on 2016-02-15 21:47:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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