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    dots Submission Name: Memoriesdots
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    Author: Solomon Disease
    ASL Info:    101, male, earth
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 284/292/104
    Words: 51
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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    dotsMemoriesdots
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    Sometimes memories are more glorious and beautiful than reality

    And sometimes reality is more glorious and beautiful than memories

    Once something becomes a memory, there is no way to know . . .

    I'll make my memories glorious and beautiful :)

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    Mazzy Star - California
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      how do you choose to make memories glorious when ones memories are too painful to bear? thought-provoking question. but i like your enthusiasm, don't let an old pessimist get you down :) thanks for sharing!
    | Posted on 2016-02-25 00:00:00 | by gwenn sundala | [ Reply to This ]
      "It's not what you lose in life
    it's what you decide to keep in your memories"
    Read these words elsewhere today and then read this. And at my age I seem to have little room left for memories that are not glorious and beautiful. Perhaps one of the of the drawbacks, or perhaps blessings of getting older.
    Thanks for the thoughts and the intro to a new artist. I tend to love anything acoustic. This is somewhat haunting.
    jan
    | Posted on 2016-02-20 00:00:00 | by jaycee | [ Reply to This ]


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