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    dots Submission Name: Touchdots

    Author: hyproglo
    Elite Ratio:    4 - 180/257/152
    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    I suppose they dignify it
    by keeping you running around in circles

    Help me here
    Hurt me there
    Keep me on another level

    Is there something else you can do?

    These screws aren't coming loose
    Don't look down
    It'll distort the picture

    How memorable this nothingness will eventually be

    Somewhere unbeknownst to me.

    Let the eyes of a petty god perceive them
    Let the eons of the unimaginable receive them
    Let the triumphs of all that's done
    do what they do best.

    If ever
    If ever, if ever, if ever...

    How would finding something more valuable be there?

    "Well I don't know, I just reckoned that if I could feel something and was meant to touch it, that thing would probably be you."

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