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    dots Submission Name: Alafia AL dots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/173
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       I remember Mr Al specifically always had a butterscotch for me in his pocket. Every Sunday :) alafia al. Here's to you!


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    Where have all the old men with candy gone? (Long time gone) 🎶
    And yes, I know how horrible this sounds.
    But please let's try to find them.
    I believe they have all died and maybe,
    just maybe, butterscotch has been
    discontinued at the plant.
    Corporate decision probably.

    I miss you old guys,
    those were the gentlemen I remember.
    Those were days when grandpas could compliment
    a beautiful child and it was treated just that way.
    When mothers wouldn't jerk their child away
    for fear of Communication!


    So I say
    Butterscotch away!!




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