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    dots Submission Name: What is noble anymore dots

    Author: Chelebel
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    dotsWhat is noble anymore dots

    To reach a level of consciousness
    where true love prevails in all hearts.

    I want to believe this wholeheartedly,
    but I just got done watching Vikings.

    So my view is skewed.

    Which leads me to my next point

    We as humans live our lives so stuck in right and wrong
    that we miss our connections and ignore our instincts.
    Living in fear will do that on any level.
    To live fearless sounds noble but
    the reality of us being noble,
    in this day and era,
    is to be on time.

    Or to be receptive towards
    others sensitivities.

    To nurture and not neuter.
    Open doors or
    to respond to someone kindly.

    I use to say I could have been lagatha from Vikings, but now I say no way.
    Not after seeing her castrate a man.

    No woman should feel the need to do this to a man.
    And therefore, no man should allow such feeling to conjure in a woman.
    Maybe this can be described as the true double edge sword.

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