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    dots Submission Name: Around the blockdots
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    Author: Latin King
    ASL Info:    31/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 104/232/145
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    Description:
       Things that happen when you venture out in the less fortunate of neighborhoods, yet you don't ask anybody for anything. That's how we live down here... Everybody minds their own.


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    dotsAround the blockdots
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    I go around the block where I get
    My drugs from
    And it's a venture I forget
    Where I get my weed crumbs
    Maybe today I feel like just beer
    Maybe I feel like looking in my rear
    For the Police is always harassing me
    In fear
    That one day going around the block
    Becomes a felony.




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