Are you there God, it's me Jazmine by lori

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Submission Name: Are you there God, it's me Jazmine dots

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Author:	lori_tab
ASL Info:	27/f/alabama
Elite Ratio:	4.33 - 1752/1517/481
Words:	126

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
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Liberties taken with the title

Are you there God, it's me Jazmine dots

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I am turning
Blind as to where I will go
My heart is yearning
To do the good in you I know

I am lonely,
See we dont share any friends
And though your love is boundless
Sometimes I think with me it ends

When I share you
It seems as if thats where you stop
Your words are on my lips
And yet they are never given their fair shot

They meet silence
And eyes that look down on the floor
Is it me? My impatience?
A lack of faith in the power I have witnessed before

How many personal victories
That my heart credits your Kindgdom
Will my story speak of you
Or is this just another season

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Don't feel bad, not all of God's servants are gifted with the convincing charisma of John the Baptist. I know as an agnostic I'm just one more of your friends who don't share your conviction but I believe in the message of your savior. I know you have received many strengths from your faith, don't discard them because of your failures at making converts. Be happy to live in the grace of this season, take joy in life's blessings.
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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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