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tormented addiction


Author: gwenn sundala
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tormented addiction



asleep in my bed, asleep in my head
i want this world to drift away
pain and torment cradle me
i beg the world, "take me away"

asleep in my bed, asleep in my head
i want this world to drift away
nightmares threaten to overtake me
i cannot speak, i cannot flee

asleep in my bed, asleep in my head
i want this world to drift away
anything i do is too painful to bear
even my love has begun not to care

asleep in my bed, asleep in my head
i want this world to drift away
one more drink is all i need
and these fears will wash away

asleep in my bed, asleep in my head
i want this world to drift away
this fear, this dread, it's all in my head
it's all in my head, it's all in my...




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