The way you write this reminds me of pieces that I've written in the past, and that alone caught my attention. That being said, while this poem appears like it's all over the place, I know what you're trying to do and that gives it cohesion, at least to me.
I like the way that you bring back a lot of your devices write before the end. What it's able to do is give this poem an ironic quality.
"Wrap yourself in a cocoon of chains/
everyone is on the cusp on living an abundant life,
or wrapping themselves in a cocoon"