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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.15 - 51/165/170
    Words: 346
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Demons a thing you should let go
    They latch upon and take a hold.
    They control.

    Who wants to live the one and only life
    With ruling voices that leave their mark?

    A mark of the beast
    Embedded
    Deep.

    Why do we want this?
    Why do we need this?

    I was raised to rise above
    Protest against
    And blame the man.

    Fuck the "they's"
    And all their opinions
    Because in the end
    It is in ours hearts....

    Our souls inside
    our hearts
    There to be seen
    There to be played

    Like on old film
    The reel it spins
    And we sit and watch
    And wonder
    Will we make it in?

    Our lives are judged
    by what's in our hearts
    And we all know
    About belief
    we all know
    karma.

    So, knowing all of this
    you still choose to say
    That there is no hell
    that there is no Nay

    Sayers.

    There is a hell
    I'm sorry to proclaim
    It has many chambers

    Addicted to porn?
    There's a place for you
    Your soul will be filled with
    Horrible acts of truth .
    Lashings
    beatings
    scratching
    Real deep.
    scars are left
    the worst part
    No end
    can be seen.

    A real place of heat.

    Convinced that murder
    Can be forgiven?

    How about a chamber
    Of brutal mournings?
    A place where you
    will feel the Sorrow and pain
    of the ones who
    Loved
    the ones
    you sent away.

    I'm sure you can
    understand the depth
    of these words
    That they come
    from a place
    that was only revealed,
    Through the dreams of babes
    and the eyes of the innocent.


    The soul searching youth that needed to transcend.

    Travel the dimensions
    when you can
    Place your Intention
    It's just in time.












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