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    dots Submission Name: Buckeye Luckdots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.15 - 51/165/170
    Words: 141
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsBuckeye Luckdots
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    Buckeyes give luck
    to those who don't trust
    Rooting they are seeds
    so they may have
    Plentiful lives to lead.

    But it's just a seed


    A seed it needs no help
    It cracks and breaks
    It's guts stick out
    The roots protrude
    And start to grow
    Upward
    Downward
    Inward
    Planted rooted
    Beneath
    the soil
    The dirt
    Its filter
    Standing
    Firmly



    Nope ,
    No not at all
    Nope not a nut.


    Buckeyes give luck
    To those who are nuts
    Picking up to find random
    Hopes in our lives
    Holding onto words
    From people who were
    Torn and tattered
    While wisdom
    spilled out
    Their mouths


    Buckeyes give luck to us.











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