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    dots Submission Name: lovedots

    Author: EshyFishy
    ASL Info:    21yo mess having crises
    Elite Ratio:    6.92 - 126/123/57
    Words: 15
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 512
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    Bytes: 75

       i love her

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    the only reason i am alive
    is: my dog would miss me
    if i died

    Submitted on 2016-03-01 05:38:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Yes... Too true.
    How often do we continue life for other's sake?
    | Posted on 2016-03-04 00:00:00 | by OneDarkFlame92 | [ Reply to This ]
      this thing is lit fam
    | Posted on 2016-03-01 00:00:00 | by EshyFishy | [ Reply to This ]

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