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Author:	nikita2u
ASL Info:	26 Female Wonderlandlust
Elite Ratio:	8 - 404/396/239
Words:	333

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
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I swim around
In circles,
Endless circles.
Until it is not I who is spining,
But the world that surounds me.

I wish it to stop, to take a breath.
But if I do.
It would mean
My death.

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I wouldn't mind if the world spun wide and endlessly around me. Instead tomorrow I am bound to bring a bad bunch of songs together for a girl. Maybe it'll make her head spin, maybe it'll churn my innards. At the very least the kitty we'll be sitting will toss her cookies, she's been doing it all weekend -- she's quite the trooper.

I'd like to turn her over,
churn out a yelp of elation,
have that moment of yearning and sating,
learn something as though it were new,
earn her authentic affection.

Other words and verbs. (because verbs aren't words)
| Posted on 2017-02-13 00:00:00 | by Outlaw | [ Reply to This ]

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