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    dots Submission Name: Blind love dots

    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.21 - 53/166/172
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    dotsBlind love dots

    My eyes completely blind
    My senses dulled depleted
    My thoughts a goulash of
    How and why it got to this
    The darkness in my eyes
    Blinded me.
    The holes in my soul
    In my heart from misuse
    The blasted lies and bouts of anger
    Deprived my light from shinning.
    My eyes always filled with salty truths
    That I had to become a detective to unveil.
    Nobody likes a liar. I can not love one either.

    Every car I ever owned was dented or ruined
    From Your fists of rage. Every item I cared about
    Broken by your hands of rage.
    My drywall a hole
    I stared at for
    to only be patched
    for a new renter.

    What did I do?

    I stared at it until it drove me crazy.
    Begged and cried for it to be patched.
    Asked for your help kindly.
    Asked for your help sternly
    Asked for your help begging.
    Dropped to my knees and plead
    Cried from my heart as it bleed.

    Took matters into my own hands.

    Covering it with nothingness
    That helps. Just so I don't see
    And be haunted by it everyday.
    A fight out of control leaving deeper
    Holes then I can cover or patch.
    Once removed the hole still exists.
    Years later my memory haunts me.

    I can never seem to rid
    the images in my memory
    The haunting truths
    I have seen
    the ruined dreams
    of you and me.

    You tore me down
    watched the whole time
    Made comments to be strong
    as you deceived from behind.
    The scenes that nobody saw
    just you and me and that was all.
    The worst of you left just for me
    I'm so fucking glad, lucky me.

    Happy anniversary spent crying in the streets.
    Yelling at me, controlling Me then leaving me.
    Disappeared into the bar to drink away your empty heart.

    I looked and looked and you were gone.
    Left alone in the middle of the road.
    My car blocked in by chains and locks
    Now I couldn't leave I was stuck.
    Full of such disappointment and rage
    Pulled with all my strength
    Tapped into my super powers
    I bent the chain releasing it.

    I wanted to drive away.
    Leave you there like you did me
    Just as I went to turn the key
    You appeared in the window with
    I'm sorry.

    Sorry doesn't rid the pain.
    Nor does it change
    The rage.

    What I did to that chain surprised me.

    I bet you watched me.
    Always watching
    never doing.

    Unforgiven memories.
    Unforgiven first year anniversary.
    Unforgiven as it eats away at me.

    Pulling the verses of love from the pages
    You sat and argued with me.
    Then why I asked say I'm sorry
    If you are just going to justify
    And defy love and it's true meaning.

    An anniversary should be filled with joy
    Not tears because we can't seem to be sincere
    And speak from our hearts or accept the truth.

    Love is more than forgive me.
    In your world my dear,
    this is all I have ever known.

    Forgive you for your stupidity
    But don't ever leave you.
    You can leave but I can never
    I can only forgive.

    I'm done forgiving.
    I don't want to anymore.
    Our memories are starting to haunt me.
    My heart it does not know the difference
    Between then and now, it all feels the same.

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