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    dots Submission Name: Mr Yin & Ms Yang dots

    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.21 - 53/166/172
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    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsMr Yin & Ms Yang dots

    A woman's dream
    to love and
    ............... be loved

    You are capable of all.....
    I do see.

    But maybe just
    Have you
    That your love is
    So much to handle?


    So strong.


    Before life

    You said it
    Willed it
    Wanted it
    For so long

    The universe
    Delivered me
    Right into your arms.

    On a silver platter..................



    ....three times

    The sand does not say to the waves
    Stop crashing into me
    And the stars will never all
    Collide at once.
    The sea as it moves it moves me
    Like your words your love

    The sky never cries
    The clouds do.
    Rain washes away
    Cleanses anew
    Sultry soil rich and full
    Of life.

    Like water mixed with sand
    This life gives what it can
    Or it can get away from you.
    Gravity always pulling
    on the things
    we try and hold on to.

    A million miles out at sea
    Lost in this mind of you and me.

    A billion stars that were wished upon
    Is there a star with no wishes attached
    So that mine may be mine and not linked
    Or shared with ancestral time or ancient pasts.

    Or do we all share those stars up there
    Looking out and up from here
    Not really needing anything to be solely mine
    I do wish for my soul to cry from the light in your eyes
    The love of your heart, the touch of your words
    As it graces my heart.

    Fill me up with love so grande
    That I want to stand near your
    Radiant light.
    So I may need to know
    Your light and
    help to make
    it brighter.

    I want to radiate with you.
    Glow , grow, be apart of this

    Sure we can re

    Or we can use that revolver.

    The darkness in the sky
    is matched by day's light.
    It's shift work.
    They work independently

    The sun always shines
    As does the darkness.

    Does the darkness always need the light
    Does the light always need the dark
    I think so.
    Like mr. yin and ms. yang :)
    They have a little worm hole
    Connecting them .
    They are linked.
    They can travel between
    The galaxies at light speed
    Just to catch a glimpse
    Of each others dreams.
    Just to see the differences

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