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    dots Submission Name: Open Housedots
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    Author: closetpoet
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 51/106/70
    Words: 11
    Class/Type: Haiku/Love
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    dotsOpen Housedots
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    Butterflies. Greeting
    his gift, black lace wrap, embraced
    greedily to chest




    Submitted on 2016-03-09 11:43:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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