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    dots Submission Name: Musings on Waterdots
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    Author: gwenn sundala
    Elite Ratio:    3.71 - 76/70/51
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Satire
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       I wrote this back in September of 2015, on the 27th if the date on the paper is correct. Just some musings I had.


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    dotsMusings on Waterdots
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    Water.
    Who takes time to notice it?
    There isn't really anything special about it.
    It's just there.
    If it were gone, who would miss it?
    Oh, but you would.
    Water is the essence of life.
    Your body can't function without it.
    Crops do not grow without it.
    Fish cannot breathe without it.
    Water is healing.
    Many who cannot walk on their own feet,
    Water Therapy helps them out.
    Oceans would be no more.
    Water.
    It is the simplest of things in the world.
    And yet it brings Life and Beauty to All.




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      Damn, this reminded me that I hadn't jotted down the author of a book titled Water...
    If you'd just google "books titled with Water", you'd see why this is troubling. I presented it as a gift to a teacher of mine - whom teaches physics & environmental science - and just as I did, she adored it. I wish I could recommend it to you, but unfortunately I can only remember the cover being a portrait of a glass of water; its background a solid white.

    It's funny, how simple such a complex element can deem itself to be...
    And how humans complicate their access to it.
    | Posted on 2016-04-09 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]
      Beautiful! Yes, the simplicity of water! We should "water" those around us with kindness and love :)
    | Posted on 2016-04-01 00:00:00 | by Janesaddiction | [ Reply to This ]


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