Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Retox dots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Narna
    Elite Ratio:    1.74 - 14/102/69
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 783
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 586



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsRetox dots
    -------------------------------------------


    Serendipity is serene pity
    in the plight of this place.
    We;
    A split-pea soup;
    I over hammed. And,
    all your heavy handed
    mastication
    did not help you swallow,
    My truth.
    In the flesh;
    Hung up to dry,
    curing
    nothing but hardened shells
    and get well wishes.
    We;
    Forgot ourselves in the depth of
    a shallow bowl.
    On the whole;
    I found myself choking on the
    tasteless reverie;
    and spitting a less contemporary
    future.






    Submitted on 2016-03-12 00:45:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    201122

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.


    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry