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    dots Submission Name: Vitamin Seadots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.15 - 51/165/170
    Words: 214
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsVitamin Seadots
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    Crash into me
    The sea breathes.

    Salty residue
    Removing
    dead skin
    From my pores
    Agitating the
    Sensitivities
    Beneath.

    Rosey
    rouge
    In places
    Unseen.

    Blushing cheeks
    A wink
    A sigh.....



    ..............................................Of gratitude.




    Thank you sea of all things glistening for all to see.





    Breaking effortlessly.







    Submitted on 2016-03-14 23:20:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Beautiful and expressive! I see the sea now as a living organ and one that's purifying.
    | Posted on 2016-04-09 00:00:00 | by MaryMaryBeth | [ Reply to This ]


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