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    dots Submission Name: Fishingdots
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    Author: Janesaddiction
    ASL Info:    48/F/Somewhere on A1A
    Elite Ratio:    1.98 - 8/24/18
    Words: 27
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsFishingdots
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    Catch of the day,
    desperate to feed her appetite

    School of plenty
    Shiny temptation
    Hooks grappling

    Plated up at my table...
    She needs new bait




    Submitted on 2016-03-15 12:14:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Is it me or are women the easiest to transform into poetry? Seems like every time I write about a man, it comes off stiff and somehow tasteless, but with a woman, it adds this...flare. Might be the way we look at things, but beauty's an abstract force that bears no witness.

    I like the mastery you imply in her actions; as though there's a scheme to these things. The topic is interesting, the format is interesting...
    Really got me thinking.
    | Posted on 2016-04-09 00:00:00 | by MyPeriodical | [ Reply to This ]
      ...she needs new flesh
    as hers is stripped
    from belly to back
    the perfect dish

    the baited barb
    all shiny bright
    loves who wish its sting
    goodnight...
    | Posted on 2016-04-04 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]


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