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    dots Submission Name: Ahh Keyhole dots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.07 - 48/165/170
    Words: 149
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsAhh Keyhole dots
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    Sleep my sleeping beauty
    For nights time for short goodbyes
    And the days are for that lonely haze
    Until you visit another time.

    Tears fill my heart
    And laughter is near.
    Only for opportune
    Seconds.


    Gentle breaths
    spilled out your name
    And made it worse.

    The tears fall from my
    Eyes as I reminence
    Of your arms surrounding me
    supporting gently.

    'Just stop.'
    'Why because I am taking
    your breath away?"

    Inhales love
    Exhales
    Your name.

    Sensual touch
    Soft
    Firm
    Blinded
    By moonlights
    Shine.

    Whispers your name.

    Half focused
    Half lost
    In your skins
    Remorse of
    Sultry touch.

    Ignited

    Cause it's you ...
    It's you
    Who
    would unlock
    my heart.


    It's you my dear
    You took a key

    Stealing it
    While embracing me.




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