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    dots Submission Name: Box Personalitydots
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    Author: Kael Fenshir
    ASL Info:    26 / M / That weird place
    Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 17/57/52
    Words: 56
    Class/Type: Rant/Misc
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    dotsBox Personalitydots
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    My personality hurts and yet there is no cure
    Forever lasting this impairment within my soul

    I'm sorry
    I'm sorry
    I'm sorry

    I said it aloud inside my little box
    My box that keeps me safe

    Despise me
    Kill me
    Punch me

    One of those you promised to keep

    Do it




    Submitted on 2016-03-20 00:02:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I can relate to this write, in the plea for someone to punish you for something you did, to try to re-right the balance, but the retribution doesn't come. I think sometimes the cruelest thing another person can do to you is let you punish yourself, because then it's never enough or over.
    | Posted on 2017-04-06 00:00:00 | by WriteSomething | [ Reply to This ]
      Vivid, expressive, and dark. I see your box but what's inside of your box?
    | Posted on 2016-04-09 00:00:00 | by MaryMaryBeth | [ Reply to This ]


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