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    dots Submission Name: Darknessdots
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    Author: Localfreak
    ASL Info:    37, Maybe, Here
    Elite Ratio:    5.37 - 131/123/76
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Poetry/Satire
    Total Views: 486
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    Description:
       Why do I keep reading selfish little twats pretentious drivel over and over?
    This is what you all sound like.....


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    dotsDarknessdots
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    I know the darkness is inside me
    I see it every time I close my eyes
    blackness, the depths of which I cannot see through everyday life.
    I fear that one day the darkness will explode,
    will spew through my eyes and into the outside world like a volcano of ebony.

    Sometimes....
    I see the hell inside of me
    through the darkness I see flickers of light, of flame
    Bright colours that tease in the blackness
    Dancing in the shadows and calling me in.

    These are the flames of hell
    the flames of my passion,
    the callings of the angels....

    Or maybe , just maybe.
    I'm sitting,
    in the dark,
    in front of the TV with my eyes closed.....




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