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Ten Years, I Digress

Author: Kael Fenshir
ASL Info:    26 / M / That weird place
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Words: 91
Class/Type: Rant /Misc
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Ten Years, I Digress

The child lies heavy for he does not exist.
He never really did in the first place.
A figment of my imagination and a Nordic curse.
Not given by a witch or the touch of a devil.
My mind breathes heavy like the stone memories it carries.
Somewhere in there a person carved the past.
I digress.
I repent.
I admit.
I regret.
I did it all for you (and you, and you).
So please care for the child.
Love it like it was real.
It's all I ever asked for.

Submitted on 2016-03-20 00:58:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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