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    dots Submission Name: Ten Years, I Digressdots
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    Author: Kael Fenshir
    ASL Info:    26 / M / That weird place
    Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 17/57/52
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Rant/Misc
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    dotsTen Years, I Digressdots
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    The child lies heavy for he does not exist.
    He never really did in the first place.
    A figment of my imagination and a Nordic curse.
    Not given by a witch or the touch of a devil.
    My mind breathes heavy like the stone memories it carries.
    Somewhere in there a person carved the past.
    I digress.
    I repent.
    I admit.
    I regret.
    I did it all for you (and you, and you).
    So please care for the child.
    Love it like it was real.
    It's all I ever asked for.




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