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    dots Submission Name: El Hombredots
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    dotsEl Hombredots
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    No parece humano ya cuando llegues a la verdad desnuda
    Sí, son parecidos los animales en medio del humo
    durante la tormenta que lo baña.

    Es por tal relación indirecta
    que los descartamos sin una segunda mirada . . .
    Pues no nos damos cuenta
    que la satisfacción simula.

    Comenzamos de nuevo:

    El hombre

    sólo cae bajo Dios hasta que el ADN revela
    conducta, pauta, detalle precisa -
    Pregúntele al hombre
    ¿con quién se ha de comparar?
    Para el hombre, el todo procede a su comparación.

    "Ponme en manos del fé, pero no en confianza." él hombre dice,
    "Por qué? Porque,
    ¿cómo me podran confiar después de todo,
    si después del acertijo
    te abandono?"

    Tan humano es
    por ser honesto.

    El hombre

    Sí, desea
    Sí, miente,
    si no
    padece.

    Entonces, ¿qué valor posee?

    ¿No sospechas pertenecer a los dementes?
    Dice la sociedad que es en ella donde la conciencia nace
    Manifiesta y se case,
    pero el derecho se muere si un cambio
    - aún inevitable -
    pase.

    ¿Y la justícia?
    Domine el blanco vacío; ojos crestados en codicia
    no hay en donde queda propósito reservada -
    Se traiciona la constitución documentada

    Con interés propio marcha el gobierno
    Subsiste con lo que recibe el funcionario
    mientras el hombre, el oficial, el ambiguo sigue engañando -

    El hombre

    Agitado é inquieto
    Con falta de respirar por consiguiente acuesto
    Buscando que consumir, adrede ciego -

    Ahora conteste . . .
    ¿Quién con seguridad
    se viste de forma voluntaria
    dentro de la oscuridad?

    El hombre.




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