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    dots Submission Name: El Hombredots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
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    dotsEl Hombredots
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    No parece humano ya cuando llegas a la verdad desnuda
    Somos parecidos a los animales en medio del humo
    durante la tormenta que nos baña.

    Es por tal relación indirecta
    que nos descartamos sin una segunda mirada . . .
    Pues por el orgullo no nos damos cuenta
    que la satisfacción simula.

    Comenzamos de nuevo:

    El Hombre

    solo cae bajo Dios mientras que el ADN revela
    conducta, pauta, detalle precisa -
    Midiendose con validación sintética
    Riéndose con la cara de hipocresía

    Así pregúntenle al hombre, ¿con quién se ha de comparar?
    Si todo procede a su comparación
    Ha de saber que lo mismo le espera en la separación

    "Ponme en manos de la fé, pero no en confianza." El hombre dice,
    "Por qué? Porque,
    ¿cómo me podran confiar después de todo,
    si después del acertijo
    te abandono?"

    Tan humano es
    por ser honesto.

    El hombre

    Sí, desea
    Sí, miente,
    si no
    Piensa padecer.

    Entonces, ¿qué valor posee?

    ¿No sospechas pertenecer a los dementes?
    Dice la sociedad que es en ella donde la conciencia nace
    Se manifiesta y se envase,
    Sin embargo el derecho se muere cuando algún cambio social
    - aún inevitable -
    pase.

    ¿Y la justícia?
    Domina el blanco vacío; los ojos prestados con codicia
    No hay propósito reservada -
    Si en vez se traiciona la constitución documentada

    Con interés propio marcha el gobierno
    Subsiste con lo que recibe el funcionario
    mientras el hombre, el oficial, el ambiguo sigue engañando -
    Al mundo. . .

    El Hombre

    Agitado é inquieto
    Con falta de respirar por consiguiente acuesto
    Buscando que consumir, adrede ciego -

    Ahora contestame. . .
    ¿Quién con seguridad
    se viste de forma voluntaria
    dentro de la oscuridad?

    El Hombre.




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