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    dots Submission Name: Finally Becoming Myself (1st draft)dots
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    Author: kase
    ASL Info:    27, Winnipeg
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 169/398/234
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsFinally Becoming Myself (1st draft)dots
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    Ive been finding bits and pieces of myself lately in others.
    Ive spent so many nights building refuge underneath these covers.
    And for a second i had thought that i found happiness in wealth.
    But all i really needed was the opportunity to love myself.

    Ive broken a few hearts; one of which broke alongside mine.
    I should've picked up on the signs, instead of misusing all that time.
    But i needed to be on my own and reevaluate my goals.
    Although cliché it was time for me to do what I've been told.




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      It's hard to look inside ourselves
    for we often don't like what we see.
    Kudos to you for being who you need to be!
    | Posted on 2016-03-31 00:00:00 | by Janesaddiction | [ Reply to This ]


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