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Finally Becoming Myself (1st draft)

Author: kase
ASL Info:    34, M, Winnipeg
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Finally Becoming Myself (1st draft)

Ive been finding bits and pieces of myself lately in others.
Ive spent so many nights building refuge underneath these covers.
And for a second i had thought that i found happiness in wealth.
But all i really needed was the opportunity to love myself.

Ive broken a few hearts; one of which broke alongside mine.
I should've picked up on the signs, instead of misusing all that time.
But i needed to be on my own and reevaluate my goals.
Although cliché it was time for me to do what I've been told.

Submitted on 2016-03-23 02:29:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  It's hard to look inside ourselves
for we often don't like what we see.
Kudos to you for being who you need to be!
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