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    dots Submission Name: Finite meeting dots
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    Author: Chelebel
    Elite Ratio:    2.2 - 53/167/173
    Words: 285
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsFinite meeting dots
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    Pushing Away the peas

    As the carrots watch in disbelief................






    Meet me in between

    Places of light and novelty.








    Next to the railroad tracks
    where the two humped camel
    welcomes every child
    for an imaginary ride
    in the sand.

    The space in between
    the humps. Meet me there,
    in the valley.















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